Part
Breaking apart inside
numb
slowly dying
Breaking apart inside
still
falling further
Breakin apart inside
dead
eyes wide open
Can u hear it
breaking
can u feel me
dying
Do u even care at all
wRote this poem awhile back...do tell me what u think of it..thkx to every-one for their lovely comments n wishes on the previous post..well..njoy the weekend..
9 comments:
i agree with you about using simple words. =]
love this one. though kind of sad. but love it. it's like a lyric of a song. ^^
by the way, you know what, i have a username before in a forum, "LostMySoul". i just thought we got something in common. =]
That's so sad :( But I love the pictures! At first I liked the one of the girl the best, but now I think I like the eye one better.
Beautiful poem!
Thanks a lot for your comment on my blog.
Love,
Mila.
i just learned writing haiku thru the net. thanks for the nice comment.
my weekend was good, except that my little angel got sick. =[
what about you? ^^
very dark, yet I feel many can relate to your poem. Stay inspired.
that is such a pretty {yet, sad} poem- you have a wonderful way with words.
and a tree house by the sea would be heaven!
x ashley
Oh Wow !! I love this poem ! You've written so less, but your words speak so many things..it's lovely...also i love the pictures and your blog :)
Hi! Aww...thank you so muc hfor your sweet comment...i lvoe your blog too !! Do come back for more...take care!
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